Damn, the game is short but it's really good. When you have better developed the characters and the story it will be incredible. I used an online translator so I don't know if there are errors, sorry if there are.
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So what am I supposed to do now, I just got the boy to come back from the ruins, the doors don't open and I don't see anything to open them. I've gone to all the shops, interacted with Edward, worked as a waitress, but when i try to sleep it says i havent done anything so?
yeah, so I figured out that’s what I needed to do. Really enjoyed the game. I would just add like a ? Or ! above NPC‘s head so you know that they have an interaction, even a … if it’s just dialogue. Enjoyed the game though and I know it’s still super early so, great so far!
Привет, я все ещё не понял, на каком языке ты говоришь, поэтому так, мне стало интересно, ты под одним из моих комментариев говорил что хочешь делать сначала мелкие Х-игры, а потом "большие" Эта к каким относится?)
Привіт, я все ще не зрозумів, якою мовою ти говориш, тому так, мені стало цікаво, ти під одним з моїх коментарів говорив що хочеш робити спочатку дрібні х-ігри, а потім "великі" Ця до яких відноситься?)
Hi, I still don't understand what language you speak, so I was wondering if you said under one of my comments that you wanted to do small X-games first, and then "big" ones Which one does this one belong to?)
Привет! Мой родной язык - русский. Да, я изначально так планировал, но на этапе продумывания сценария я решил написать что-то по сложнее. Что-то короткое не особо шло в голову с данной идеей.
Thanks for making an english version. I'm a fan. Very cute protagonist. Incredibly solid first release. Looking forward to future updates.
I'd like to give some feedback though, and warning, I talk too much.
Some translation/buggy things first. The blacksmith refers to the dagger as a 'gun' a few times. It's amusing, but kind of throws you off.
There are some errors in grammar here and there, but those aren't a huge deal to my eyes.
Some stuff remains in Russian here and there, mostly in the menu. Equipment screen especially, as well as some choice boxes. Not a huge problem with yes/no, those are easy for anyone to learn and remember. But some others go beyond.
Sometimes the textbox displaying the character speaking doesn't switch from one character to the other, even with lines clearly meant to be said by the other character. Context clues can get you by, but translated text makes it a little harder to figure out than usual.
Secondly, I'd like to offer up some opinions on design, this is a bit overbearing of me, so apologies for back-seat designing. I'm not seriously being demanding, I just like what I see and want to offer opinions.
I'm sure you intend to eventually create interiors for most of the village, but if you have an area that looks like you should be able to enter it but it isn't done or you aren't gonna let us enter(examples being doorways, stairs, roads, etc), I'd advise you to place some text on it when the player tries to enter. A description of the room/buildings purpose, just text saying it's locked, 'in development', whatever. Helps make the doors and such feel like more than just a tile the same as the others. World feels more alive. Bit unfair of me to jump on this, since I'm sure that's something you intend to handle eventually and this is the first release, but I find it odd when games don't, and some never bother to go back and do it.
And another is for when you work and the like, it'd be good to be able to say yes/no. Especially if it ever advances time or something like that. Though it seems you're going more linear than sandbox, most scenes were very good about giving your choices.
Finally, a way to hide the textbox would be good. Even as transparent as it is it blocks many of the scenes. If it exists and I just happened to miss the key, apologies.
Anyway, that's about all I wanted to mention. Looking forward to seeing where this goes. Great work.
Thanks for the feedback! I translated with the help of online translators, so there may be mistakes that I am not able to keep track of, But with the "Gun" I will try to fix it! The rest of the translation bugs are related to the method itself, which is extremely inconvenient, but I have no choice. But I will try to correct the mistakes.
I couldn't find a free plugin for hiding text, but by the end of chapter 2, I'll buy it.
unfortunately I couldn't play hervi, the game stays on a black screen when I open it, but knowing its power, I congratulate you on another project that looks like a great game from the capture screens, congratulations
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Damn, the game is short but it's really good. When you have better developed the characters and the story it will be incredible. I used an online translator so I don't know if there are errors, sorry if there are.
Nice Game, Now waiting Chapter 2 release.
it's super early, but I'd say GAME OF THE YEAR material right there!
wow! cute goblin gal! <3
Thanks :D
And the art of the Gobbo girl is so cute (and sexy)!
Hallo can you make a website or an android version of you games ?
I don't know, I haven't thought about it
Any updates?
I am working
if youre wondering about updates to games on Itch.io
i would recommend looking to see if they got a patreon and going there
youre not going to get any details in depth without paying BUT you will be able to see the timestamp and heading of the most recent post
it at the very least lets you get a better feel on how things are going
Will there be impreg?
A gem among the stones.
i love it its so cute
So what am I supposed to do now, I just got the boy to come back from the ruins, the doors don't open and I don't see anything to open them. I've gone to all the shops, interacted with Edward, worked as a waitress, but when i try to sleep it says i havent done anything so?
Did you complete a quest with the bar owner?
yeah, so I figured out that’s what I needed to do. Really enjoyed the game. I would just add like a ? Or ! above NPC‘s head so you know that they have an interaction, even a … if it’s just dialogue. Enjoyed the game though and I know it’s still super early so, great so far!
That's good
Thanks)
Cant wait for more, I was sad when I ran out of stuff to do
я уже поиграл в игру, топчик, жду дальнейшего сюжета
I try to play the game on joiplay but it doesn't work and i don't know why ?
о русский, дарова , кстати а на андроид будет?
Привет
Не знаю, не планировал
Я просто с JoiPlay играл, вполне нормально работало.
Привет, я все ещё не понял, на каком языке ты говоришь, поэтому так, мне стало интересно, ты под одним из моих комментариев говорил что хочешь делать сначала мелкие Х-игры, а потом "большие" Эта к каким относится?)
Привіт, я все ще не зрозумів, якою мовою ти говориш, тому так, мені стало цікаво, ти під одним з моїх коментарів говорив що хочеш робити спочатку дрібні х-ігри, а потім "великі" Ця до яких відноситься?)
Hi, I still don't understand what language you speak, so I was wondering if you said under one of my comments that you wanted to do small X-games first, and then "big" ones Which one does this one belong to?)
Привет! Мой родной язык - русский. Да, я изначально так планировал, но на этапе продумывания сценария я решил написать что-то по сложнее. Что-то короткое не особо шло в голову с данной идеей.
Ждал от тебя новую игру, не забудь сделать бусти
Молодец!
Thanks for making an english version. I'm a fan. Very cute protagonist. Incredibly solid first release. Looking forward to future updates.
I'd like to give some feedback though, and warning, I talk too much.
Some translation/buggy things first. The blacksmith refers to the dagger as a 'gun' a few times. It's amusing, but kind of throws you off.
There are some errors in grammar here and there, but those aren't a huge deal to my eyes.
Some stuff remains in Russian here and there, mostly in the menu. Equipment screen especially, as well as some choice boxes. Not a huge problem with yes/no, those are easy for anyone to learn and remember. But some others go beyond.
Sometimes the textbox displaying the character speaking doesn't switch from one character to the other, even with lines clearly meant to be said by the other character. Context clues can get you by, but translated text makes it a little harder to figure out than usual.
Secondly, I'd like to offer up some opinions on design, this is a bit overbearing of me, so apologies for back-seat designing. I'm not seriously being demanding, I just like what I see and want to offer opinions.
I'm sure you intend to eventually create interiors for most of the village, but if you have an area that looks like you should be able to enter it but it isn't done or you aren't gonna let us enter(examples being doorways, stairs, roads, etc), I'd advise you to place some text on it when the player tries to enter. A description of the room/buildings purpose, just text saying it's locked, 'in development', whatever. Helps make the doors and such feel like more than just a tile the same as the others. World feels more alive. Bit unfair of me to jump on this, since I'm sure that's something you intend to handle eventually and this is the first release, but I find it odd when games don't, and some never bother to go back and do it.
And another is for when you work and the like, it'd be good to be able to say yes/no. Especially if it ever advances time or something like that. Though it seems you're going more linear than sandbox, most scenes were very good about giving your choices.
Finally, a way to hide the textbox would be good. Even as transparent as it is it blocks many of the scenes. If it exists and I just happened to miss the key, apologies.
Anyway, that's about all I wanted to mention. Looking forward to seeing where this goes. Great work.
Thanks for the feedback! I translated with the help of online translators, so there may be mistakes that I am not able to keep track of, But with the "Gun" I will try to fix it! The rest of the translation bugs are related to the method itself, which is extremely inconvenient, but I have no choice. But I will try to correct the mistakes.
I couldn't find a free plugin for hiding text, but by the end of chapter 2, I'll buy it.
unfortunately I couldn't play hervi, the game stays on a black screen when I open it, but knowing its power, I congratulate you on another project that looks like a great game from the capture screens, congratulations
it looks very good, keep it up
its a bug with the app, just download it online
I'm hoping this is what I think it is, that being a female protagonist game that's actually wholesome and not about corruptio
I mean its pretty obvious its corruption tbh, in one of the pictures you see her asking why people like her boobs. Which in time she will know lol
I am a simple man🧐. I see Gobo, I put in my collection.
happy to see your new work Hervi doubly so since it's a goblin girl.
please keep working on this one its amazing!
Thanks! Of course!